Nice timing and characters, but not really funny
There where some parts that make me giggle for a moment, but all in all it was a bit too random, and if it were a bit more violent it would make up for it. But I liked your animation style, and the sound was nice too.
Next time, make Dad slice some brains open or something like that :P that would earn my respect for you and dad ;)
Not bad, but not really good. Still, enjoyable
Nice plot, but bad timing and physics
The storyline got my attention, and I liked the opening screen with the cursor. But the whole interface lacked sound, with the white noise there was no noise sound, the buttons didn't give response, a bit off a pity.
But the opening sequence, with the documents was nicely performed, the sound gave it a nice atmosphere to it. Dark and secret.
The anatomy looked somewhat off, but the amount of detail made up for it. Try getting more balance between the bodyparts, for example the neck was kind a short and extremely thick.
But all in all, the speed of events following each other up was a bit to fast, you didn't go into the backgrounds of the characters, and why are those events happening? What kind of company are they? etc.
The voilence was nicely performed, exploding heads always do the trick don't they :P
I liked the film in overall, but the next episode needs some work :) Like to see more of you, you got the feel for it.
Owh, and Def336: The story play's in like 2023, so the numbers are right ;) Pay a little attention to the given information before making claims of error :D
Yeah thats a good idea. I think on the next one I'll add menu sounds and stuff, I was going to on this one I just didn't know if the first frame would take a while to load and piss people off.
Yeah, I'm still working on perfecting my anatomy, I am still on 15, I got ways to go.
As for the speed of events, I will explain everything fully in time, I did allt hat on purpose. That clips is only an intro for first time watchers.
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